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EXT. SAINT PAUL
Master shot of downtown Saint Paul at sunrise.
INT. SAINT PAUL HOTEL
Hotel employees have just completed morning tasks and are
coming together in the lobby.
CYNTHIA is greeted by the hotel staff as she exits the front
door. She enters the park across the street.
CYNTHIA is 36, an Artist living and working on Downtown Saint
Paul. She has a standing room at the hotel. She comes to
the hotel and Rice Park to be with and watch people. Cynthia
is a writer and painter. Cynthia is a strong, sensitive,
inspiring woman.
Rice Park is a meeting place in downtown Saint Paul. It is
wooded with a large fountain and many benches. Rice Park is
surrounded by the Saint Paul Hotel, a century old library and
theater. The park is filled with people from all walks of
life.
INT. CLEVELAND OFFICE
VICTOR is 35, an Executive that travels to Saint Paul on a
regular basis. Victor is a passionate, kind and lonely man.
He is consumed with his work and has little time for social
pleasures.
VICTOR is joined in his office by MANNY, his male secretary.
MANNY is 27, tall, good looking, well spoken and educated.
MANNY
I've got your tickets to Saint
Paul, the notes from the Shepard
case and your schedule for next
week.
VICTOR
Thanks.
MANNY
My pleasure.
Victor stares out the window onto the city below. Manny
walks up to the window to speak to Victor.
MANNY
You better hurry!
Victor does not respond. He continues to stare out the
window. Manny tickles Victor. He is very sensitive and lets
out a loud scream.
EXT. MINNEAPOLIS SAINT PAUL INTERNATIONAL AIRPORT
[Sequence of shots - Begin]
A plane lands, flying over head.
Plane wheels screech on the runway.
Victor gets into a taxi.
The taxi pulls away.
[Sequence of shots - End]
INT. VICTOR'S HOTEL ROOM
Victor sits in his room and watches TV. It's a beautiful day
outside. Victor walks over to his window and looks down on
Rice Park.
EXT. RICE PARK
Victor is looking out his window. Victor moves away from the
window.
The camera moves down from Victor as he leaves the window, to
the hotel entrance as Victor exits the hotel.
The park is crowded with people. There is an ice cream cart
selling ice cream, kids and adults are playing.
Victor sits on the Park Bench. He is looking at the kids
playing in the fountain. Cynthia is sitting across the park
painting.
Victor and Cynthia meet eyes a couple of times. Victor
always looks away first.
A group of boys comes over by Victor, blocking Victor's view
of Cynthia.
Transition to Cleveland
[show time passing - 30 days]
INT. CLEVELAND OFFICE
Manny and Victor sit at a conference table together in
Victor's office. We join the end of their conversation.
MANNY
I don't think so.
VICTOR
It's right here buddy, Simon and
Barry had the copyright, so they
retain the revenue.
Victor stands up, hands Manny the magazine article. He
continues to his desk and then towards the door.
VICTOR
I have to go! Have a good week.
MANNY
You to!
EXT. MINNEAPOLIS SAINT PAUL INTERNATIONAL AIRPORT
[Sequence of shots - Begin]
A plane lands, flying over head.
Plane wheels screech on the runway.
Victor gets into a taxi.
The taxi pulls away.
[Sequence of shots - End]
EXT. RICE PARK
Victor is sitting on the same bench that he always sits on.
Cynthia is laying on the bench across the park. She is
reading a book. There are many people in the park.
Victor is staring at Cynthia.
A ball rolls over to Cynthia and causes her to pull her head
up from the book. She looks around and catches Victor
staring at her. Victor looks away and Cynthia smiles.
Cynthia walks to a different part of the park. Victor tries
to follow with his eyes.
Cynthia walks out of site. Victor is talking to some little
kids and looses site of Cynthia. He looks around the park
and does not see her. He sits on the bench and scans the
park.
Cynthia walks up slowly behind Victor and gently places a key
in the bench next to Victor.
The key is an old skeleton key with a large silver pendulum
that reads 'Property of the Saint Paul Hotel, room number
1023'. Cynthia moved back to watch Victor discover the key.
Victor looks at the key and then slowly looks around the
park.
Cynthia turns to walk towards the Saint Paul Hotel.
The hotel attendant greets Cynthia as she enters the hotel,
holding the door for her.
INT. SAINT PAUL LOBBY
Victor enters the elevator alone and the door closes. The
elevator doesn't move as Victor has not pressed a button. He
looks down to the number of the key. Room number 1023, he
pushes the button.
INT. HOTEL ELEVATOR
The elevator rises to the 10th floor. The elevator stops at
the 8th floor allowing an older woman to get on the elevator.
VICTOR
Hello.
OLD WOMAN
Hello.
The old lady sees the key in Victor hand with the silver
ring.
The elevator stops at the 9th floor and no one is there. The
elevator stops at the 10th floor and both Victor and the
older woman get off.
Victor walks the opposite direction of the old woman. He
notices that the numbers are going the wrong way. He turns
to see the old woman going into her room. They stare for a
moment and then the Old Woman goes into her room.
Victor looks at his key. He walks to the end of the hall to
find 1023.
INT. CYNTHIA'S HOTEL ROOM
The door cracked. Victor knocks lightly on the door and it
opens. Cynthia is dressed in a long bath robe provided by
the Saint Paul Hotel. Victor tries to speak and Cynthia
covers his mouth gently with her finger.
She holds Victors hand and guides him to the edge of the bed
where she slowly undresses him.
Cynthia motions Victor to lay on the bed. She applies a
large towel that covers his entire body head to neck. She
prepares the oils and lotion that will be used for the
massage. There is a long silence and Victor tries to speak
to Cynthia again.
With Victor still covered, Cynthia removes her under pants,
but keeps the robe on. She reaches over and pulls the towel
down to Victors waist. Cynthia climbs onto Victors back and
begins to massage his back and neck with the oils.
Victor closes his eyes, giving up on trying speak to Cynthia.
She continues to massage his shoulders working down his back.
Each time Cynthia moves, Victor feels her naked body on his
back.
[Time passes]
Pulling Victor from his little fantasy, she turns him over
and begins to massage his head and scalp. Again, Victor
attempts to talk.
VICTOR
What's your name?
CYNTHIA
Cynthia
VICTOR
Nice to meet you.
Cynthia applies a finger to Victors mouth.
CYNTHIA
Shshsh ... No talking.
She completes the massage.
CYNTHIA
Time to go, I have another
appointment.
VICTOR
An appointment?
Victor is confused. Victor gets dressed. Cynthia takes
Victor's hand and guides him to the door. She sort of pushes
him out of the door, but in a cute way.
CYNTHIA
Breakfast?
Victor steps away from the door.
CYNTHIA
Six?
VICTOR
6 A.M. Downstairs.
Victor smiles at Cynthia
Victor has the big silver key in his hand. After closing the
door, Cynthia opens the door to get the key back.
CYNTHIA
I need that!
Cynthia grabs the key from Victor and then show gives him a
quick smile.
CYNTHIA
So what's your name?
VICTOR
Victor.
CYNTHIA
See you in the morning Victor.
Cynthia closes the door.
INT. VICTOR'S HOTEL ROOM
Victor sits on the bed talking on the phone with and Air
Lines Representative.
VICTOR
$200.00 to extend the ticket!?
AIRLINES
That's right sir.
VICTOR
OK!
Victor lays back in bed and falls asleep.
EXT. RICE PARK
With the hotel in the background, there are many people in
the park. Night falls on the park. The sun comes up.
Cynthia is sitting in the window of the hotel cafe.
INT. SAINT PAUL HOTEL CAFE
Victor joins Cynthia who is already seated for breakfast with
juice and a couple of donuts.
CYNTHIA
Good morning.
VICTOR
Good morning to you. Looks like
you are getting started.
Victor picks up one of Cynthia's donuts
CYNTHIA
Breakfast of champions.
Victor sits across from Cynthia and they look at each other
for a moment.
VICTOR
So do live in the hotel?
CYNTHIA
No, I just have what you might call
a standing room. A long story that
I will tell you some day.
VICTOR
Tell me now.
CYNTHIA
No.
Victor takes another look at Cynthia's donuts.
CYNTHIA
Are you hungry? You better get
your own donuts.
Cynthia gets the attention of KATHY. KATHY is 61 and has
worked for the hotel for 30 years. Kathy and Cynthia are
friends. Kathy comes to the table.
KATHY
Hi Cynthia.
Cynthia introduces Victor to Kathy.
CYNTHIA
Kathy this is Victor.
Victor shakes hands with Kathy.
KATHY
Pleased to meet you. I've heard a
lot about you.
Victor looks at Cynthia.
KATHY
Just kidding. Can I get you
something to eat.
VICTOR
I'll just have a couple donuts and
some orange juice.
WAIT PERSON
Two plain cake donuts and a large
orange juice?
VICTOR
Sounds good.
Kathy leaves the table.
VICTOR
So you know everyone around here?
CYNTHIA
Most of the older generation.
There is a pause in the conversation. Cynthia and Victor
look at each other. Cynthia takes a bite of her donut.
CYNTHIA
You've been hanging around that
park for some time.
Victor nods his head.
CYNTHIA
I see you sometimes, and then not
for weeks.
VICTOR
I'm a drifter.
CYNTHIA
A drifter.
VICTOR
I get in here a couple times a
month.
VICTOR
I would see you to.
Cynthia and Victor look at each other. Victor looks hard at
Cynthia and then Cynthia breaks the stare with a funny face.
VICTOR
Always a little scared to say hi.
The Wait Person comes back with the juice and the donuts.
Cynthia and Victor pause in there conversation while the wait
person is at the table. The wait person gives them both a
look as she leaves.
CYNTHIA
So it's a good thing I invited you
up for a massage.
The camera will pull out of the cafe to the front of the
hotel and we will continue hear some of the conversation. I
bus will drive between the camera and the conversation,
providing our transition to Cleveland.
VICTOR
A good thing.
CYNTHIA
Do you enjoy it.
VICTOR
Yes!
CYNTHIA
Good.
EXT. MINNEAPOLIS SAINT PAUL INTERNATIONAL AIRPORT
[Sequence of shots - Begin]
A plane lands, flying over head.
Plane wheels screech on the runway.
Victor gets into a taxi.
The taxi pulls away.
[Sequence of shots - End]
EXT. SAINT PAUL HOTEL
A taxi pulls up to the hotel. The door opens and Victor's
head pops out and he looks into Rice Park. Cynthia sees the
taxi and Victor.
Victor and Cynthia lock eyes and smiles.
The hotel attendants at the hotel are watching. They are
smiling.
INT. CYNTHIA'S HOTEL ROOM
Cynthia finishes her massage.
She lays her naked body on his back and pulls herself to his
neck to kiss him for the first time. Victor turns his head
to meet her lips for a passionate kiss. They kiss and hold
each other for an extended time.
Victor and Cynthia making love.
INT. CLEVELAND OFFICE
Victor is in his office alone. He stairs out the window at
the city below.
EXT. SAINT PAUL
[Sequence of shots - Begin]
Victor and Cynthia sitting in the park under a tree. Playful
and loving, they kiss and hold hands.
Victor run after Cynthia down a street.
Cynthia and Victor look at the river.
Cynthia and Victor playing with kids in the park.
Cynthia and Victor make love
Cynthia is painting in her studio
Victor and Cynthia running naked in the hotel hallways.
Victor and Cynthia in the park
[Sequence of shots - End]
INT. CLEVELAND OFFICE
Victor stares out his Boston Office Window.
EXT. SAINT PAUL HOTEL
A city bus stops on the corner across from the Saint Paul
Hotel. Victor steps off the bus to see Cynthia sitting in
the park. He approaches Cynthia and they share a passionate
kiss.
Victor and Cynthia sit for a moment and watch the kids play
in the fountain on a beautiful summer day. Cynthia takes
Victors hand and they walk toward the hotel.
INT. CYNTHIA'S HOTEL ROOM
Cynthia and Victor make love
Exhausted Cynthia and Victor fall asleep in each others arms.
The next morning the sun fills the room. Victor wakes in the
same spot where he laid with Cynthia. Cynthia is not there.
There is a note and a small box on the counter.
Victor reads the note as a tear forms in his eye.
Inside of the box is the key to her room.
EXT. SAINT PAUL HOTEL
Victor walks out the front to the Saint Paul Hotel. It's
winter. The camera pulls back to reveal Victor alone in a
park, trees covered with snow.
The End
Last Updated: 12 August 2003
by Chris Macgowan
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